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26-04-2024 04:04 PM
26-04-2024 04:04 PM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
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26-04-2024 09:02 PM
26-04-2024 09:02 PM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
Oh this is very good @creative_writer I think you articulated this human state exactly. 'trapped in what I don't want to remember' this stings, - & got to me. It also asks me a question?
A little different, one I find what actually looking for another.
(Believe me, it is edited for PG viewing, hopefully it makes it)
Sunbaking Naked on a Saturday
It's my body
I can do whatever
I want with it
Be free
Skin sunburn
Love she bleeds
White healing
Grass
Leaf falls on me
Beside s me
Bride
Naked
I want to be
It's mine,
Preference they do not see
They can see
Crazy Naked Lady
Hugging a tree
I can't be Me.
They look, watch.
It's not fair
It is my body
Earth I seek,
Naked Rock
Me to sleep
Please no loud - I will break
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27-04-2024 11:15 AM
27-04-2024 11:15 AM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
Love this!
thank you so much for sharing what is such a clear and succinct view of your experience… thank you
🙂🌺💜
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27-04-2024 11:19 AM
27-04-2024 11:19 AM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
Oh, @creative_writer 🫂🫂🌺
your words capture the emotion of your experience so well..I could feel the intensity through them with full clarity 💜🌺
thank you so much for sharing
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27-04-2024 11:22 AM
27-04-2024 11:22 AM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
@StanD your words express hidden fragility and lost understanding, to me…thank you so much for sharing 🫂💜🌺
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27-04-2024 11:39 AM - edited 27-04-2024 11:39 AM
27-04-2024 11:39 AM - edited 27-04-2024 11:39 AM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
@StanDand @PinkFlamingo 💖🫂 I was struggling to find simple words to express how I felt yesterday, but couldn’t. I find it easier to express through creative writing, because simple words just don’t do the trick.
@StanD I love your poem, it certainly describe hidden fragility as @PinkFlamingo said. There is such profound meaning behind your words
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27-04-2024 01:53 PM
27-04-2024 01:53 PM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
Thankyou @creative_writer & @PinkFlamingo
Please keep writing & I very much appreciate your feedback 😊
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27-04-2024 02:27 PM
27-04-2024 02:27 PM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
@StanD 😎
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27-04-2024 03:09 PM
27-04-2024 03:09 PM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
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07-05-2024 05:04 PM
07-05-2024 05:04 PM
Re: Roses are red, violets are blue, here's a poetry thread, from me to you! (TW)
Thank you @StuF 🙂